Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, February 8, 2018

Week 4 Story: To Challenge the Gods' Favored

This writing is based on R. K. Narayan's The Ramayana, of which I have acquired a physical copy

It’s been 4 days since I’ve eaten, Vali said to himself. 16 since I’ve seen a living creature. 22 since I’ve killed anything. He paused his stride in thought, trying to remember. It’s been 84 days since I’ve seen that worthless cretin Mayavi… and 835 days in the netherworld. No. 836. He resumed his stride.
            Vali hated the silence of the netherworld. Very few things lived here, and very few of those inhabitants actually made any noise. The result was a world of darkness and silence. In Kiskinda, silence was a welcome escape from the chaos of ruling a kingdom. But here, it was whole, enveloping, strangling. The world was silent, and very rarely was that silence broken.
            The darkness was just as bad. Vali’s eyes took months to adjust to the piercing darkness of the netherworld, but even after, he could barely see more than 4 or 5 feet in any direction. The demons had been easy to track at first; no matter where they went, they made a ruckus, and lit fires so they would feel at home. But the remaining ones had learned from their weaker counterparts. They adapted to live in the netherworld, the way its normal inhabitants had.
            Vali wasn’t really sure what lived down here. The netherworld was not a place explored by many. Vali was the first of his kind to brave the darkness. But then, Vali wasn’t really here to explore -  he was here to hunt.
            More than 2 years ago, a great demon strolled into the kingdom of Kiskinda where Vali ruled benevolently. He was a gigantic beast, almost as tall as the trees of the jungle he walked in. His horns were longer than a full-grown man and curled hideously, and his teeth stuck out of his mouth like knives. There was fire in his eyes and in his breath, and in his many hands he held cursed black weapons, stained with blood long ago. Tremors could be felt a mile away any time his feet touched the ground.
            As the demon walked into the jungle, he cut and slashed everything in his path, screaming “VALI YOU PATHETIC APE! COME FACE ME, COWARD!” His path left a wake of ruin and flames, and all the citizens of Kiskinda fled in terror.
            But when that pitiful demon saw me, he was terrified. “I AM MAYAVI,” the demon had screamed, “AND I WILL BE YOUR DOOM.” But when Vali dropped from the treetops, the demon took one look at him and fled. The ground didn’t tremble when he ran, Vali thought to himself. It trembled when he stomped to, but not when he ran.
            For all his bulk and gigantic swords, Mayavi ran fast. Vali had chased him, and with every step, Vali had gained on him, but never before had anyone been able to evade Vali for as long as that demon had. Just as the demon was within arm’s reach, he turned and sprinted straight into The World’s End.
            No one had plunged into that wretched tunnel and returned to see the light of day, but Vali was no ordinary monkey. Vali was the strongest creature in the Universe; Shiva had seen to that. He waited at the mouth of the cave only long enough for his brother, Sugreeva, to catch up to him. “Watch the kingdom while I’m gone; I won’t be long.” That was all he said before he sprinted right after the demon.



            What Vali didn’t expect was the small army of demons Mayavi had gathered beforehand. They had all hidden and laid in wait in the netherworld for Mayavi, the only demon fast enough to make it back to the tunnel, to bring the ape. When Vali finally caught Mayavi, he found himself surrounded by glowing red eyes, hungry for his blood.
            I miss those first few days, Vali thought to himself, when the demons actually came to me. Chasing them isn’t half as fun as fighting them. It was the best fight Vali had ever had. 3 days of killing demons, with no time for sleep or food, and they never laid a scratch on his skin. It was the third day when they gave up the attack and scattered. Vali watched them run; they scurried like ants under his foot. He killed many of the slow ones that day, but the one he really wanted was Mayavi. Vali had killed any demon he found down here, and he was sure many of them had died on their own, but the only demon he pursued was the one who challenged him in the first place. Bait. That’s all he was. And I’ll be sure to remind him of it when I find him.
            Vali had tracked Mayavi down a number of weeks ago, but some of his demons had remained loyal to him. Three of them had blocked Vali’s way, only for a second, but it was enough time for Mayavi to escape from view. But the next time I find him, he won’t have any more distractions to throw at me.
            Vali’s stomach growled. Hunger was not an adversary that Vali could beat with his fists. Vali had lived off of the blind insects that lived down here; most of them were bigger than an elephant, but Vali had no problem with that. Keeps me fed longer.
            His thoughts were interrupted by a sound. It was faint, but recognizable – the subtle crunching of feeding. Vali halted in an instant. Finally, something to eat. Vali crawled on all fours, no more than a few inches each second, still unable to see his target. As he got closer, the smell of blood grew stronger, and the outline in the dark grew clearer. Just when Vali got a clear view his prey, its head turned, and two flaming red eyes looked into his own.

            “Mayavi. I’ve found you at last.”  

Author's Note: This story is based off the character Vali in R.K. Narayan's The Ramayana. Vali is described in depth; it was said that the gods all together were not string enough to churn the oceans, but Vali pushed them aside and churned it on his own. After that, Shiva gifted him unlimited strength. In the Ramayana, a demon named Mayavi does challenge Vali and immediately run into the netherworld. However, the incident is never described; the only thing said about Vali's time in the netherworld is that he was there for 28 months and that he did in fact kill Mayavi. Thus, I wrote this just to fill in some of the gaps. As far as I know, this does not contradict anything in the Ramayana, so I didn't change anything.

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(embarrassingly, this is actually Sun Wukong from Chinese mythology. He provides a lot more badass monkey art than Vali. Source - smitefire)

Wednesday, February 7, 2018

Reading Notes: Narayan's The Ramayana part D

These notes come from R. K. Narayan's The Ramayana, of which I have acquired a physical copy 

I'm not often fond of changing integral parts of a well written story like the Ramayana; I prefer to take what is there and elaborate or simply write what isn't there. That being said, I was very disappointed with how Rama treated Sita after fighting a war for her. If I were to do a writing over part D, I would rewrite the scene where Rama finds Sita.

Once Ravana is dead, Rama sent Hanuman to find Sita. Once he finds her, she is overjoyed, and rushes to see Rama in her current state. Hanuman stops her and tells her that Rama wished for her to dress herself and decorate herself before she came to see him. But when she arrives, he seems "moody and cold." Afterwards, Rama says that he killed the demons not for his or Sita's sake, but for the good of humanity. Then he says "it is not customary to admit back to the normal married fold a woman who has spent time alone in a stranger's household. There can be no question of our living together again."

Upon hearing this, Sita decides to kill herself. She commands Lakshmana to build a fire. Lakshmana looks to Rama, who literally doesn't care. Thus, he builds the fire, and Sita willingly jumps into it. The god of fire came forth and scooped her out of the flames and presented her to Rama, who then felt her integrity was established.


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(Sita's Trial by Fire - wikimedia)

Tuesday, February 6, 2018

Reading Notes: Narayan's The Ramayana part C

These notes come from R. K. Narayan's The Ramayana, of which I have acquired a physical copy 

For this week, I want to write about Vali. I thought the description of him and his strength was fascinating, and really captured the scope of an epic. Vali has lived since before the gods were immortal. When the gods wanted immortality, they tried to crush and churn the ocean to make a nectar which would give immortality. All the gods together could not do it, so Vali literally pushed them aside and singlehandedly churned the ocean. As if he wasn't strong enough, his gift was unlimited strength, and as if THAT wasn't enough, anyone who faces him is also reduced to half of their strength. Vali has casually pushed Ravana out of his way. Some other descriptions -

"He has more energy than the 5 elements and could with one stride cross 7 oceans"
"When he strode across the earth, the mountains shook, and storm clouds broke apart, for they were afraid to rain on him."
"Even Yama feared him."

The story I want to write about is the story of Vali in the netherworld. Vali was the king of Kiskinda when a demon named Mayavi appeared and challenged him. But Mayavi actually looked at Vali and immediately regretted his decision. He ran to the edge of the world and fled into a subterranean tunnel to the netherworld. There, Vali spent 28 months before returning successful. The only note on his time spent in the netherworld is that the wording says after emerging that he had "finally destroyed" the demon, implying that he spent most of the time fighting or looking for it. Also, just in case I need it, his brother's name is Sugreeva.

I was trying to find a picture that imbued just how strong Vali would look, when I stumbled upon this. It certainly isn't how I want to portray the only being stronger than all the gods combined, but I also couldn't pass up the opportunity to share that this brand exists.


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(Swole Monkey - trademarkia)